|Reviews for Puzzle Piece|
| cecyouyed 2/4/11 . chapter 1
again. Awesome metaphor.
I think your poetry identifies alot with me and mine. Seems as if my style an yours would go perfectly together.
Good job :)
| simpleplan13 11/27/10 . chapter 1
"in your heart?"... In (since the rest are capitalized)
I like this piece because it's something we can all relate to. I thought the puzzle piece thing might be a cliche image, but I think you did it well. With your questions about the smile and hand and heart. It was a really great way to change up the idea. Repeating that question and the end and beginning worked well together too.
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