oh wow, I cannot believe I haven't been able to read so many chapters! I checked this story a couple of weeks ago (now that my health is finally better) and have been reading ever since! thank you so much for this wonderful story! I really loved it and couldn't stop reading when I was into it again! thanks! can't wait for the second part and I'm sorry it took me far too long to review! :)

OH CLIFFY can't wait for rebirth

Let me just say, that I've been reading all your stories, you're an awesome writer, and you need to start book two! please!

damn this dude has had a fucked up life filled with misunderstandings galore and i feel sorry for him but hope the next instalment he will have a better future

Okay I finished what was probably one of the most interesting, exciting, terrific story I have come across. I am hoping you will begin posting Rebirth in the near future. The storyline was fascinating, you paint such a wondrous picture with a sky of flying dragons and phoenixes, and the characters, including the flying kinds, are so endearing and captivating. Cannot wait to see where Serae'al and Rivak go from here.

What a lovely chapter, the bonding between Serae'al and Sylass was just heart-warming and made me a bit teary-eyed... an awesome story so far.

Just finished the first chapter, I like, I like...off to a fascinating start.

Fabulous, fabulous, fabulous...Book Two pleaaasssseeeeeee )

I've had so much going on lately, but I'm glad I finally finished reading this story. It's so great! I look forward to the next installment.

Hello! This story is fascinating but somehow confusing at times. It's hard to explain but it's like I am always missing something. Especially at the start of new chapters. It feels like someone pressed fast-forward or changed channels without me knowing. I even went back once to make sure I didn't miss something since I am a fast reader.
Spoiler here,so... The meeting between Seraeal & Beloved is truly a beautiful scene. I also found the part between Rivak was hurt & his revival deeply moving. I am absolutely in love with the little ones. I would love to see how they grow in the second book & the great adults Rivak & Seraeal are becoming. So good luck in writing the next part of the story

This was a really fantastic story! I hope you continue with the sequel and post it soon!

Thanks for publishing, you are an amazing writer, keep up the wonderful work.

Wow - totally hooked on these characters, this really drew me in and held me captivated, thanks for an excellent read!

Congrats on finishing the book. I've really enjoyed reading it and will definitely follow you to the next!

yikes. You do have a way with words. Love the story.

One thing I noticed though, you seem to have a habit of leaving words out of a sentence ... or starting a sentence, but finishing it in such a way that the first bit doesn't make sense ...

Anyway, I did enjoy the story, and I look forward to the sequel.

YAY! I love it and I can't wait to read the next book. I absolutely love the dynamic between Serae'al and Rivak. I also liked the end bit, sets up a nice cliffy. - LF