I think that many people can feel like this sometimes. You describe the feeling in a really good way. I get the picture in front of me and can connect to the feeling itself through the poem.

Exactly how I feel right now - lifeless. So true and touching, painful though but life is right? Beautiful.

its so heartbreaking, but so good D

it's very touching. I liked the part about being there, but not her soul.

great poem.