A bit avante-garde; I feel like the meaning of it was lost. There's no focus, reason, or real emotion behind it, other than the fact that the person is crying. I like the idea of using a lot of sounds as the basis for the poem, it's a cool idea. I would love to see some development though - what is the reason for the crying, or the actual emotion behind the tears? A single line, or even a single word, can bring this whole thing into focus and make it super-clear. :)

I don't get it.

very desperate and sad.

good poem.