Noooooooo. I got hooked on the first chapter but I didn't know it was removed... :( please did you post this anywhere else? I REALLY want to read it. I understand why you took it off though...

Oh wow, that was such an amazig story. I loved the realism of the characters and everything about them. Your writing style was amazing and I just wanted something good to happen for Logan because he deserved it.

There were just one little thing I didn't understand about this story though. There were moments where you'd be rerferring to someone but I wouldn't know who was doing what. I don't maybe that's just me that didn't understnd it and I should have read it more clearly but that was about it. I think perhaps Lu's mother could've been in it more because the parts with her in them were good but just a little stilted.

Other than that, I actually just loved the whole concept that you had going. Your writing style is amazing and some of the imagery and puns you had in there were funny and definitely caught the personalities of the characters.

I wish Lu's friends had been more supportive about everything but I guess being humiliated does that to you.

Anyway, I just thought I would tell you how much I enjoyed your story and I'm sure I will be reading more of them (unfortunately I don't know when I will get the chance to but it's great to find another awesome author on fp whose stories I can read :D)

WOW the ending is really fantastic! loved this story. it's so real and deals w such serious issues. i have to say u wrote logan's point of view really well. a lot of romance stories have the guys sounding more like girls. but this one doesnt. n although it isnt stated explicitly, i think lu loves him. that's why she stuck by him all this while. n it's so beautiful. plus when he confessed about the abuse to her... that was amazing. a lot of writers on fp would have written his thought process. but you went straight to his actions, which really show a lot more about his character. fantastic writing.

hi, this was amaazing :) i couldn't wait till after my exams :s and just went ahead and read it... it was AWESOME :) thanks x

this story is SO good!

Hon, I'm about to cry.

Actually, I'm tearing up.

Oh shit, hope no one walks in.

This was beautiful. The last line.

I looked at the bottom to go to the next chapter...and discovered this was the last chapter.

The ending was actually perfect.

Movie worthy perfect.

But...it's something that all readers and viewers will have a hate/love relationship with. Or just hate it.

Honestly, I hate it.

I want MORE.

But...it's just...so good the way it is.

A sequel would be nice :)

as many people probably have requested.

I'm wondering if there will ever be a sequel...

By the way, the story was original. The characters were memorable. I just want to sit here and cry.

Drama.

Humour.

Romance.

You had it all.

Amazing piece of work.

See ya'

This was fantastic! I do think Logan's dad cared for him somewhat or else why would he have stopped the first time. I'd really like a sequel please. One showing them in college or something slightly in the future, together and happy would be fantastic. Please? Regardless it was lovely! Just what I was looking for. Thank you for writing!

great story! had me tear up everytime Logan's dad beat him and the fact that people saw and heard what was happening really upset me.

Thanks :)

The last chapter made me cry... D: Anyway, I loved the story! Good work :D

Absolutely loved this story. It touched my heart and i felt a little teary at the end. :)

that was the saddest f-ing chapter ever...i almost cried myself...glad to see the silver lining at the end though.

Awe! *teary eyes* that was so good. I love this story so much and I really wish you would write an epilogue! I know what the ending means and I know it's more dramatic and just good, but I would've loved to see how their lives turned out after he woke up, no matter how it turned out. Just to see a happy and relieved Logan *sheepish look*.

Thanks for this, it was really great and it had a good balance between romance, drama and humor, I loved it.

Will be looking forward to more of your writings.

;)

That was an amazing end to the story. Seriously. Usually I'd be upset with such an ending, but... It's just hopeful and amazing. This is a brilliant story; I absolutely loved it!

WAH! It's over :'( :'( :'(. And you made me cry (again). *gives you the stink eye*

But the last line... Oh my heart soared.

I just wonder though, did his dad confess because he was sober and may have felt some remorse? I mean, if he was "on the run", would he really risk a chance of going to buy beer?

Anywho. Loved, loved, luh-uhv-duh this. Gah. Amazing *bows to your awesomeness*

Oh yes. I loved this story. I hope you will do an epilogue...*bats eyelashes* Pretty please? :)

Anyway...I loved you characters and didn't review as much I should've...(GUILTY!) But it was fab. :D