I've definitely felt similar to this before. I like this because I can relate to it very much and I love how it's worded. This really is a work of art. Congratulations, amazing work. I've just starting looking at some of your work. :)

I like this. I really do. As a matter of fact, I am crowning it the Most Triumphant Example of your poetry.

...maybe not that far? I don't know, it's almost midnight and I haven't started my science notes.

Either way. I especially enjoyed the 'dialogue', and I imagined a child breaking one of the dolls in that previous poem you wrote.

Great job.

And you don't flaunt all too much, if I'm only discovering this now.