|Reviews for A Dubious Goal|
| Negasi 4/19/12 . chapter 1
Hello sir! I know I drop off the site sometimes, but here I am! And not a zombie yet! :D. I don't know how I missed this piece though. I have one word to say first. IMAGERY! IMAGERY! IMAGERY! It's like I'm reading a movie in my head if that makes any sense. Your choice of words is fantastic for lack of a better word (I think I just am in awe of this poem and it's made my brain mush). Love the beginning flowing right back into the ending. What starts in bed may end in bed or wherever it may be. Excellent excellent job sir!
| Domina 2/13/11 . chapter 1
I liked this a lot! It's superb use of both imagery and irony made for an entertaining read :)
| Lord Darling 11/21/10 . chapter 1
Wow. So hallucinogenic,so, well, whimsical.
| Snowflakes Are Drifting 10/6/10 . chapter 1
aw, that day will come, I assure you.
| YasuRan 9/23/10 . chapter 1
Okay, I admit. I liked 'the parting lip-bite that tornadoes a nervous system'. Ahem, very accurate...
Also, 'a stenciled nipple's ecstasy' made me giggle with the resulting mental images it produced.
While I'm not exactly sure what was the inspiration behind this, it sure made for something entertaining on my screen :)