|Reviews for September|
| Hoshi Nagaiki 9/23/10 . chapter 1
I liked this. I love reminscince pieces. For some reason, I really enjoyed the third verse. It was kinda climatic. In the first two verses, everything's happy and then, the third one you start sensing something more intense. Then, by the last one, you realize that the happy days have mostly gone. . . .
It's something that's easily relateable.
Awesome poem! Keep writing!