This is fascinating, its like poetry. Its beautiful and terrifying at the same time, and hard to interpret occasionally but still so incredibly beautiful that it doesn't even matter. I love this.

I really liked your description and the way you're telling this story. The only bone I have to pick concerning it is that you said that they were untarnished by sin, and then said that they have the heartbeat of sin.

Otherwise it was freaking great.

-Jenn

Wow D. I mean . . . Damn it. I mean 'wow'.

-Masq

Interesting...