Thank you for being the creators of my Sandman and Theta nightmares. x] Seriously...It's 2:00 AM and I just so happened to find your story and now, I shall go sleep, in fear that by tomorrow, my soul will be stitched together along with all the others and my eyes will be scraped out. xD

that was cool.

i like the detail and i really like the sweet dreams David

Warning: This review will contain a lot of shouting. And colons. For no real reason. XD You have been warned.

First things first: SQUEE THEY KISSED THEY KISSED YAY YAY YAY HAPPY DANCE I AM ECSTATIC AND FULL OF JOY! ! ! ! ! ! ! :D :D :D :D

Second things second: OHMIGAWD IT'S DONE. How can it be done? D: But I'm half glad it's over, because now the pain for the charries is done, but I want it to keep going! So confused about my emotions now! :D D:

And now, third things. . .well, you know: Wow. This was an amazing time, chicas. For real. I totes love you guys right now. Your characters mesh so well together, and the story was awesome. I suppose there's not much to say here, besides thank you.

Thank you for writing this, thank you for sticking with it and not abandoning it (Hypocrite? Qui, moi?), and thank you for not killing Tommy, Ryan, Rio, Katelyn, or Jadyn off. XD

Also, Kaitlin, if you're removing PM to try to get it published, then I retract my earlier. . .uh. . .polite statement. XD Because I would totes buy it. And Katelyn, if you plan on getting your stuff published too, I would buy that as well. _

Anyway, to wrap up the review that looks long on my screen but probably isn't that long in reality, thank you guys so much. Update so—

Nevermind. XD Keep up the amazing work! :D

Latni-chan

WHAT? YOU CAN'T REMOVE PORCELAIN MURDERER! D: *clings to screen* I won't let you! ! ! !

But apart from that, BECAUSE YOU CANNOT DELETE IT OR I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN, you guys are really awesome at updating. And I think I'm actually a Theta fan now. Which is really weird. But. . .he let them go. But he's only doing it to cause more pain in the future. But he has to feel all that pain. But. . .

GAH SO CONFUSING! D: Reading about Theta is more emotionally turbulent than having a crush on someone. XD

But now I get it OMG! D: That's an AWESOME plot developing there, Kaitlyns. That's terrible, though! What a thing for them to go through! D:

Actually, EVERYONE in this story is having a crappy life. I'm so sorry, everyone! D: *group hug*

YOU DON'T SUCK, KAITLIN! NEITHER OF YOU SUCK! YOU ARE BOTH AMAZING. :D

And you, chicas, are so amazing at updating. Like, for cereal. :D I love you guys.

And because I love the story too, I'm not going to give you a break even though you're awesome. XD So Thanks for updating, chicas! :D Please do so again soon!

Latni-chan

OhmigodIhateyousomuchrightnow. I can't breathe because if I do, I will let out a huge, embarrassing, blubbering sob. Even if there's no one nearby to hear me, I will still embarrass myself. Hold on a sec while I compose myself, plz. . .

. . .Ok, I think I'm a bit more. . .uh. . .composed now. Phew. Ok, seriously? At first, I was like, GO CECILIA! HELLZ TO THE YEAH FOR BADASS MOTHERS! And then Theta got rid of the Sandman, and I was like, "Wait, what? Was Theta just nice? Wtf?" And then he started killing Cecilia, and I sort of gasped dramatically and was mildly relieved that he was back to normal.

THEN I felt horribly bad for Theta because of what he has to live with all the damn time. So that threw me off and made me rather irrationally annoyed.

And then she died and Thomas was broken and Theta kept rubbing it in and I felt horrible and I almost started crying and then I went to write the review immediately rather than waiting a little while like I occasionally do. . . And that's pretty much now.

HAPPY EARLY BIRTHDAY! :D I hope it's a fabulous one! _ A large virtual birthday cake for you! _

Muchos gracias for updating, chicas! Despite the emotional rollercoaster described in too much detail above, I still adored it! :D Happy birthday again, but that doesn't excuse you from updating again soon! XD

Latni-chan

YAY. I LOVE YOU BOTH.

And that's enough with capslock. Now, I must get something out of the way, so I'll need to turn capslock back on again. Terribly sorry, chicas, but I need it right now.

STOP MAKING THETA LIKABLE, PLZ. D: It's confusing the hell out of my brain, cuz in this chapter, he seems like he could honestly be a relatively good guy, more of an antagonist than villain, but then I remember the events of PM, and then it's like, no, he's totes a bastard, but then he's delaying the Sandman (who is now, in my opinion, eviler than Theta), but he's gonna kill Tom, but he's gentle with Jadyn, but he likes toying with Ryan. D: It's like the world is spinning underneath my feet!

Oh no, Rio's getting his memory back? This isn't good. . . And some fluffy Ryan/Katelyn goodness! :D Well, and some not-so-fluffy-but-realistic goodness as well! :D

Anyway, thanks so much for updating, chicas! _ I loved it, as per usual! Please do so again soon!

Latni-chan

Holy bloody hell, chicas! O.O Y'all amaze me. For cereal. :D D'aw, you make me feel warm and fuzzy inside. _

So, I already gave you a certificate and a medal. . . Now you get a plushie. A plushie of reviewness. Review again, and you get cake. :D

F. . . I knew I didn't hear anything about this Amneda character in PM. :U

Why are Theta and the Sandman after Jadyn? Do they have something against Ryan and Katelyn, or against Jadyn herself? Maybe he just wants the complete set. XD

And he CAN'T call in Thomas's soul just now, Rio just said he loved him! D': They deserve to have an adorable life of love, full of. . .I dunno. . .adopted babies and kisses and baby ducks and kittens!

Anyway. Y'all are amazing. (Also, have either of you guys read Lord of the Flies recently? If so, I've got a bit of a favor to ask.) Thanks so much for updating! If you do so again soon, you may have cake! :D

Latni-chan

Hey, what's that make me then? Chopped liver? D:

You may love Theta, but I'm kind of hating him right now. Like, for cereal. DX He CAN'T kill Jadyn, he just can't! And where's he taking Thomas? D':

At least Ryan and Katelyn made up. _ That makes me happy. And maybe now Ryan will believe Thomas completely. Wait, no! That won't do anything, because Thomas is gone now! DX

Don't kill Thomas and Jadyn, please? He deserves a happy life with Rio, and she deserves a future! Life isn't fair, but it should be just this once! TT

Anyway, y'all totes get a medal now. For cereal. Please update again as soon as you can! _

Latni-chan

*sniff* Ryan, you have redeemed yourself, sweetie! D': *hugs* Poor dear.

I must say, y'all scared me so bad at the beginning of the chapter. I saw "green eyes" and went, "Oh no they didn't! DX Jadyn!" and I think I sniffled a little and made a sad sound. Then it turned out it was someone else, and I felt really bad for being relieved that it wasn't Jadyn. Does that make me a bad person?

YAY TOMMY'S OUT! ! ! ! :D :D :D *dances happily* I knew you couldn't keep him cooped up in there forever, the poor dearling. *pat pat* It's ok, hun, you're out now. At least, you'd better be. *glares suspiciously*

You totes get an updating certificate, chicas. _ That was epic. Please repeat it, and you'll get a medal? :D

Latni-chan

I am not amused with Ryan right now. Seriously. Wtf, man? Stoppit! Thomas doesn't belong in the loony bin! D:

. . .Don't kill Jadyn, please. She can't be taken by Theta (I still can't think of him as Sandman. He'll always be Theta to me.), because I will cry. I will wail and blubber and curse you in as many languages as I know (which is only, like, three. XD ) and I will demand you bring her back.

But other than my own personal emotional "issues" with the characters, BRILLIANT chapter. It was mostly more exposition, but seriously, it was awesome.

Now, to sum it up: 1) Get Thomas OUT, plzandthankyou. 2) Don't kill Jadyn! 3) Please redeem Ryan. I don't like finding him a jerk. :(

Anyway, thanks for updating, chicas! Please do so again soon! _

Latni-chan

F! Theta! DX He scares the crap outta me.

Sorry for taking so long to review and then not reviewing with my usual flair, but I'm rather ill at the moment. *sniff* However, that's not to say that this chapter wasn't brilliant, because it was, and you chicas totes deserve a full review. Unfortunately, I can't provide it at this time. :C But I wanted to review before you updated again and I felt like a slacker for not reviewing. XD

It's awesome, though! Truly. _ Update soon, chicas.

Latni-chan (Whose computer spazzed again and logged her out as she reviewed. P: )

F! Theta! DX He scares the crap outta me.

Sorry for taking so long to review and then not reviewing with my usual flair, but I'm rather ill at the moment. *sniff* However, that's not to say that this chapter wasn't brilliant, because it was, and you chicas totes deserve a full review. Unfortunately, I can't provide it at this time. :C But I wanted to review before you updated again and I felt like a slacker for not reviewing. XD

It's awesome, though! Truly. _ Update soon, chicas.

Latni-chan

Yay! An update! :D :D

Heh, Jadyn did ask Rio about the birds and the bees. _ That was cute. XD Rio seemed so flustered.

Oh no! They took Thomas to the asylum? How could they? TT He doesn't deserve it, after everything he's been through! Bring him back, he CAN'T be in the asylum! How is he gonna warn them about Jadyn? *hugs Thomas* Poor baby. . .

. . .Goddammit, Theta again? Crap. *shudder* Theta creeps me out. Like, for cereal.

Also, poor Ryan and Katelyn! That must have been so horrible for them. At least it wasn't their first child, but still. . . At least they've got each other, and Jadyn besides. Still, that makes me very sad. And stupid Theta isn't helping.

Oh geez, isn't Theta what the Doctor used to go by? Nu, now my perception of him is skewed! D: Conflicting impressions are confusing me!

Anyway, thanks so much for updating, chicas. Y'all are epic, seriously. Siriusly. XD

Latni-chan

. . .My review cut off, and it won't let me review again, so I logged out just for you! :D

Anyway, I meant to say more about poor Tom, and how Katelyn and Ryan are now getting to do their jobs. I feel so bad for Katelyn, though! I mean, it must be horrible to have to cut open the corpses of dead children and see NOTES SEWN ON THE HEARTS. CREEPY NOTES THAT STAY IN MY BRAIN AND REFUSE TO LEAVE, THANKS VERY MUCHLY. :C

Also, uh, guys? Theta's gone, right? He's not coming back for this story, right? D:

Anyway, which I say too much but will continue to say, thanks so much for updating! Good luck with NaNo, I still have all my words for today! _'

Now, where's my Rio Nutcracker? X3

Latni-chan

I'M SORRY IT TOOK ME SO LONG! ! ! *falls at your feet in apology*

But other than that. . . Rio is adorable.