I really, really love this story. And I love the fact that Yermo is Kenny's prince but because he doesn't match the 'prince' requirements neither of them are willing to accept it though they're happy together, the sex is amazing and they kinda understand each other.

Even if Yermo is trying his very hardest not to get attached and that's pissing Kenny off who told him not to get attached, lol.

And I love the fact that the misunderstanding is actually understandable since they went into it with the notion that they were just supposed to be friends and now their feelings are getting all confused.

One thing:

["Not even that," Yermo said vehemently. "Not even that."]

I think you meant Kenny said vehemently.

Of course we haven't seen the last of Justin. That's totally not your style.

I dunno. I really like this story, but I feel like that's all I ever say. um. *tries to think of something clever* Ah, it's sweet and cute, and a bit fluffy. It's also awesome that I'm not really sure who to cheer for-Justin sounds awesome, but I think I'm suppose to be rooting for Yermo... well. All will come clear, someday.

Ta,

Qui

Always happy to see another story, and one continuing in the "A Suitable Lover" world is an additional pleasure. Looking forward to more.

It's a nice start. I can see the beginning of the shape already. And really I don't mind. (I got you note, but decided to read this before I responded). I got my inspiration from theskimblishone.

The note at the beginning makes it sound like the me on lj not the me here rather than the bits on lj. Not that that matters.

I really wish fp would get the hit count working again. It's been broken more than working the last few months.

I like this so far, it seems to be going interesting place. And I still absolutely adore your writing style. You manage to finagle so many details in without making it seem like overkill- very nicely done :)