Oh I truly loved that Lisa, Kenny, and Crystal are accepting him as part of their family. I can't wait for part 3!

I really like that Johnny is trusting Kenny more and more. It is like a pseudo father/son relationship. I'm really enjoying this story.

I keep picturing Johnny in a fishing hat with bright fluffy lures all over it. I'm not gonna lie... he's rockin' it!

Can't wait to see what happenes next!

This is great! I love how much they've bonded.

I think Kenny should get a chapter! All to himself.

Woo-Hoo! Internal conflict!

Oh wow. Crystal's natural instincts are kicking in. It's getting interesting.

This keeps getting better and better. Thanks for the update.

Wow! This is a spectacular story twist!

I'm eagerly awaiting more!

How many times have I told you how amazing a writer you are?

Oh, well, here's another one to add to the number!

-Gummy

Ooh! Cool. Does the skin close up too?

Thank you for all the wonderful updates. Oh Crystal's dad came back and all of sudden wants to see her! I'm so glad Kenny and Johnny both agreed that was wrong of Lisa to let him take Crystal with no information.

Haha! I think Johnny does belong.

-dreamy sigh

Johnny is quite the character. I love how creative you are about how he covers his trail.

AW! :'(

Poor Johnny! Now I get it. He refuses to mess up again... but how does he know for sure how to make the change on Crystal?

Or does he not quite know...?

Ooh! Burn!

So, if Uncle knows about the lake... why doesn't Ken- oh... the family doesn't know... only uncle...

Great chapter! I can't wai to see what happens next.

Oh I didn't expect Uncle Robert to offer the old Blood ritual to Johnny. I hope he really doesn't want to harm Johnny. Oh poor Johnny he just wants a family. Thank you for the wonderful updates.