Whenever a poem can pull the heart-strings of the reader, then it must be good. This on did just that to me. The way you played with the words was beautiful, making the sharp and emotional.

I have to say I loved the beggining and the kind of sarcastic tone to it. Very good.

"But for you, it seems, there's always tomorrow/not that I won't be there then/but that you're willing to chance it." -That was my favorite part. There is always tomorrow... Brilliant.