Minor mistake, last line "...havee no choice..." but otherwise, i like it. :D

I think you should update this story, it could go really far!

Again, a little uneventful, but still good.

Kind of uneventful, but no mistakes I saw.

Wow, I love your FictionPress stories because they start right away. I was reading some other story and it was a horror about giant bugs slaughtering humanity, at least according to the summary. I read through three chapters, each at least a few thousand words long, and the bugs never made a appearance, so I stopped reading the story.

PS I bet you got Lupa from The Lost Hero, sequel to the Percy Jackson series.

Well done dearest sister. You're writing is impeccible. But Avesa should be spelt with two s if you want it to be like you told me. Now if you could just review my stories... You know the one one about the unicorns...

Good idea to use Latin genus-it is genus, right?-names for your characters. However, even though this is the prologue it is so utterly deviod of character description I'm- (stopping self at last second) about to be very rude. But, for one thing, I didn't even know Avesa was a bird until you mention wings, although now I see the connection to "aviation". Toss in a few narrowed cat eyes and gleaming claws, and I'm cool. Otherwise, I'm regretting letting Miss Snark get into my head. Hope I wasn't snarky here.

Great story so far! It sounds interesting... I hope you write more-si far, it this story is exciting!

Nice. I love the way you put the conflict between cats and dogs.. that was a classic. I hope you keep writing. .