This is my life personified. "We fall into the routine of our lives/We never gave up on our dreams,/but locked them away from everything" I love it.

Hehe, lol I was a prom queen? LMAO, thats rich! Thanks. Some of the ryming SUCKS and I'm aloud to say that because I'm related to you. But overall, its pretty good.

This was such a deep song! It seriously touched something inside my heart, hahaha. It flows smoothly and I love, if you pay attention close enough, that it's like reading a very fast-paced story. From being a little kid, to like a pre-teen and then a teenager (i think...? lol) and then an adult. It's just...yeah, a bit breathtaking XD Lots of people can relate to this lol

That's about all I can say because I'm exhausted lol but also, I loved the chorus the best. Hope to read more of your songs sometime soon!

-Penn