Okay, so... I'm interested. That was really well-written. Very impressive. The idea of the short stories being "loosely" connected makes me curious, so I guess I'll pay attention to the next chapter!

Very nicely done.

I was rather impressed with this story. The idea of multiple short stories intertwining has always fascinated me, but I've lacked the discipline to finish such a story myself. The action scenes could be a little more drawn out, but that's just because I'm big on action in stories, but that's just what I'd do. The story is fine the way it is. I love the plot and the way the dialog flows in. It's very well written for the most part. I want to see more. i'll make sure to come back and read the next chapter you add once it gets here.

Good work.

Peace, Love, Triangle

-Darket