|Reviews for Cleo|
| Btwn-the-lines 2/25/13 . chapter 25
It has been years and I am STILL waiting!
| cvvphantom217 2/9/13 . chapter 25
This is really good, except its been OVER A YEAR since your last update! So please write more this is fantastic! :D
| Shadowkiller176 2/2/13 . chapter 25
Please update! Sooo amazing!
| Kaylie 1/15/13 . chapter 25
Good story are they planning on eating her? I can't wait for more chapters! :)
| Madame Jenn 12/18/12 . chapter 2
Hi! I know it's been two years since you've updated and I just started your story, so I don't have much to say,
BUT I just wanted to point out that calling an Asian person "Oriental" is actually really offensive. The word is used to describe things, not people. I think the correct term you're looking for is API, American Pacific Islander ("South Asian" denotes India and what Americans call the Middle East), or you could just specify what kind of Asian ethnicity he is. Thanks!
And I don't know about your later chapters, but breaking up your paragraphs makes it a lot easier for readers. A large block of text is slightly intimidating and sometimes leads to skipping altogether.
And now I'm off to read some more! :)
| Erstel 908iu 11/15/12 . chapter 25
Holy shit! They're gonna eat her! UPDATE SOON!
| Oldwolf 11/6/12 . chapter 25
No update for two years? u gave up
| OLDWOLF 11/6/12 . chapter 4
Predictable trouble. NO BLANKET.
| oldwolf 11/6/12 . chapter 1
With a name like cleopatria, she is big trouble.
Wrap her up in a blanket and take her home!
| eire girl 8/24/12 . chapter 6
great story im sorry but guilty of not reviewing. but you finish this chapter with 'fear for Kieran Black', should that be 'fear of Kieran black'.
| Blaith Nightshayde 8/9/12 . chapter 25
This is a great, great, story, but the one thing I ask of you, is to create a page break before your authors' note. Please! I beg you! It doesn't even have to be special 0.0 but for some reason (yes, I know i'm dumb) I always read your AN as part of the story, every darn time v.v just a friendly suggestion .
| Tammy Rae 7/27/12 . chapter 25
Where's the rest of the story? So far so good. Lots of twists and turns. It is annoying that your author's notes are longer than your chapters but your chapters are so good it is only a bit annoying.
Please update soon.
| Roxan 7/24/12 . chapter 11
Okay, I tried reading this story but I couldn’t stomach it… It’s such a cliché and not in a good way! try to be more creative... this site is for creative writing after all! reconsider being a part of this site please...
| Dinobunny 3/27/12 . chapter 25
Wow. This story sounds good! Please don't stop writing! I wanna know more abt thena and co! Haha
| mwah199516 3/8/12 . chapter 25
Omg please write more, i love this book, im like half a millimeter from kissin you and flickin you in the forehead to write more!
*Dont be offended of anything i say unless its praise, i want to be a stalker when i grow up so i leave alot of cyriptic messages...alot