Haha, "signed her" - I get it. Very clever.

Very nice!

I don't really know much about haiku, so I usually read it as a poem.

I felt that this haiku is REALLY sweet.

'until he signed her'. The contrast in here was beautiful. Most of all, what you had used to symbolize the 'desire' was really unexpected.

AND I simply LOVED the pun!

Really living up to your screen name :D

ooh lovely. very smooth. The 'her' rather than 'it' threw me for a sec, but then it kinda fit with a pillowbook sort of feel. very satisfying.

Definitely clever! It's has abstractness and yet makes perfect sense. Amazing how you did that.

Haha, a triple pun, nice one!

Very clever indeed. Keep it Up!

The sad truth is it took me way too long to get this one. (Not your fault, I'm sometimes on the slow side) But once I did, hat's off, witty and cute. :)

feels a little suggestive :P

i liked it, random and all

very interesting way of defining "silent attraction". I enjoyed this.

-William

Nice way with the words. It shows you don't need a lot to get the point across.

Wow, this is really clever! I'm impressed. Well done and keep writing.

Anna _

Terrific, Punslinger, as usual.