|Reviews for Silent Attraction|
| Spring Storm 7/5/12 . chapter 1
Haha, "signed her" - I get it. Very clever.
| Kallie Bryant 12/10/10 . chapter 1
| 3M2R 11/12/10 . chapter 1
I don't really know much about haiku, so I usually read it as a poem.
I felt that this haiku is REALLY sweet.
'until he signed her'. The contrast in here was beautiful. Most of all, what you had used to symbolize the 'desire' was really unexpected.
AND I simply LOVED the pun!
Really living up to your screen name :D
| sophiesix 10/23/10 . chapter 1
ooh lovely. very smooth. The 'her' rather than 'it' threw me for a sec, but then it kinda fit with a pillowbook sort of feel. very satisfying.
| Silverbelle 10/22/10 . chapter 1
Definitely clever! It's has abstractness and yet makes perfect sense. Amazing how you did that.
| wo bu ai ni le 10/14/10 . chapter 1
Haha, a triple pun, nice one!
| Random-Idiocity 10/13/10 . chapter 1
Very clever indeed. Keep it Up!
| nickyO 10/12/10 . chapter 1
The sad truth is it took me way too long to get this one. (Not your fault, I'm sometimes on the slow side) But once I did, hat's off, witty and cute. :)
| Eternal Skies 10/9/10 . chapter 1
feels a little suggestive :P
i liked it, random and all
| William G. Thorne 10/6/10 . chapter 1
very interesting way of defining "silent attraction". I enjoyed this.
| tiger002 10/6/10 . chapter 1
Nice way with the words. It shows you don't need a lot to get the point across.
| Princess-anna57 10/6/10 . chapter 1
Wow, this is really clever! I'm impressed. Well done and keep writing.
| J.A. Fletcher 10/6/10 . chapter 1
Terrific, Punslinger, as usual.