I love this! I don't even know why, but I think it's great! It sounds like something you'd read in a poetry textbook, and it'd have some kinda article about how the jar represents the withering morality of our post-modern time, or some junk like that and then you'd read the special-edition interview with the author and they'd say they just thought it sounded good and then you'd respect them even more. Yeah.

it made me think about a song, the rhyme is cool.

cant stand when kids do that... grape jelly is the worst...

very interesting point of view and poem topic. i liked it! :)