Wow. Beautiful. I love it. I love all of it. Especially the last three lines. Soo gorgeous. I feel it simplifies love in a wonderful, astronomical, metaphorical way. Amazing.

"If I could, I would climb into heaven and help you rebuild the sky"

This touches me deeply. The constant ache when they're not there, and never being able to stay mad.

The poem is pretty short, but you managed to convey a good amount of emotions in the limited space you have. I think the simplicity and brevity is one of the best aspects of it, actually. You can feel the sadness of the speaker without it being too much. I think the first like is my favorite- "broke your stars" just sound so lovely and gives the reader a fragile image of the person the speaker is addressing. It does well to set up the mood.

I don't feel like I really grasp what is happening here. Or rather, I suppose it's easy to grasp but not on a level that makes me feel connected emotionally. The first two lines feel the strongest.

wow, i really like this. the imagery is so clear and delicate. i especially i love the lines "if i could, i would climb into heaven / and help you rebuild the sky." short and sweet. thanks for sharing!

Short but full of emotions. Very interesting. I loved it! :)