I like this. I think a typical princess would have thought like this rather than wanting the 'fairy tale' ending, ironically. The lines were corny at times, but then every prince is I assume, and the cheesiness matched the story perfectly. I liked the ending especially. Great job.

Amber

Ohh, shiny!

Very, very nice one. I like it because it is different for other ones. I dunno how but it is.

*thumbsup*

I love the twist! :) can't wait to see what happens next

I really like this! I love the style of writing - it's simplistic yet absolutely absorbing, very easy to read. I love the characters as well - despite the shortness of the story I feel like they are very real and filled out. I really want to read more and find out what happens in the end. Overall, just a lovely piece of work.

Update soon!

Aw... Poor Wings... I'd hug ya, but you'd kill me.

Hehe, poems about Masochism... *Coughs* I shall stop laughing.

This didn't seem that bad don't beat yourself up over it! Hmm, I have a feeling I know what the thir task is...

Don't worry I won't eat you, you updated quickly.

Heehee, I bet he knew she was watching him even though he ducked. He's probably feeling so Awesome...

You are a horrible tease. Just as one begins to get into the story, it's over. Very cruel. Please udate soon! I'm looking forward to getting to know this prince better, he seems interesting...