|Reviews for Mitch who Liked Pickles but Hated potatoes|
| Green Gummy Bear 10/11/10 . chapter 1
1: The character development was great. It's easy to tell that Marigold
2: Maybe a little description of how he looks.
3: I like the flow. Nothing too random that makes one confused.
4:No "stuff" that is distracting.
I like this story. It is cute! Am I correct in assuming this is as far as its going?