|Reviews for supernova|
| classic violet 10/28/10 . chapter 1
beautiful imagery, gorgeous.
| simpleplan13 10/24/10 . chapter 1
I liked the alliteration in the first stanza it worked well.
I also thought the ending was great. It's a beautiful description of how things didn't work out.
The other line I really liked was "with our pasts on our backs" it's a beautiful and unique way to describe how our pasts continue to affect us.
The only thing is going from detonate and then waiting to do the explode part seemed a little off me to.
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| believe in her 10/14/10 . chapter 1
the last two stanzas are definitely the strongest...a very good poem. i look forward to reading more! ]