i see what u did thar.

In other news. I quite liked this. It was... tragic. Kind of... Servant-of-Evil-esque. Except, you know. Replace Len with lover and... yeah.

"You are the queen of this castle/Of this land/Of this man" is probably my favorite line. It's just striking for some reason. A passive-heartfelt confession, if you will.

Good job.