Intresting- I quite liked the ending, actually. The last line. "Let us". Gotta love that.

Even though they're pretty short, I really do enjoy the way you wrote these. The style is intresting, you know what I mean? Maybe?

Anyways, nice job. Will you be doing a video for this as well?

Yours,

Nymph

...Okay.

"Even his pet mouse laughed when it heart his name."

Should be heard. Also, the pronoun is somewhat confusing. It indicates that the mouse laugh's when it hears the mouse's name...should clear that up. (I picked that up off of a Twilight hate site, actually. Nice tip.)

Strange, but I loved the video. :) :) :)

Hahahaha! So funny! Thank you, Amy. I was having a crap day (pardon my French) and you just cheered me up. Thank you so much! Ah, how I love using many o's. It is fun. Anyway, hilarious! XD

StarlightAtMidnight

Ha-ha. The zebra. XD "Let us hope he does not bathe soon."

I really liked that line.

XD

Write more, please!

Ha-ha. This was really funny, Amy. I'm currently laughing my butt off. XD

XD

This is such a change, Amy! These are what I'd expect from PBG, lol. But you pull it off nicely, as always. :)

Summer

...Where *do* you get these ideas? They're ah-mazing. If you publish this, I'm pretty sure it'll be a best-seller :)

-Alexis

XD This is hilarious. I found this on your FS :)

And you're wondering who I am? 'Tis Alexis!

But I love your random stories. They are very amusing, Amy.

-Alexis

heehee very funny i liked it :) the llama named giraffe, it could be a bestselling childrens book!

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