quite good! Though you confused names a couple of time, the pace was good. And storyline too. Less twists and turns were there and kept the fine balance between senti and cool writing. It's one of the better ones on this site. I thoroughly enjoyed it. :)

So pleased with the happy ending.

Just one thing in the last paragraph kind of confused me.

Where Rachel and Ajay making eyes at each other or was it meant to read Rachel and Devin.

Congrats on a write the faster story ever. Certianly pleased me.

Rae.

I loved this whole story...Everyone was so in character. I just wished it would have been Curtis and Alexander at the end. Oh well. Great job nevertheless!-Steven

wow i love yr story so much, i hope u continue it! Alexander is my fav character, cause he's so cute!

Wow.

That was the shortest, fastest story I've read to date.

Glad for the happy ending.

Rae.

Wow this is getting more and more complicated the further it goes on.

My head is spinning. But in a good way :)

Thank you for all the regular updates its nice for a change to actually be able to enjoy a story and not have to wait so long for updates that you forget what the story is about.

Rae.

M. Hope Alex doesn't get could between to boys fighting over him.

Would hate for him to have to choose.

Rae.

I love this story.

Can't wait for more!

Curtis is going to get his, isn't he?

Love Ajay.

Hey!

Interesting story.

To the point and nice short chapters (which I like)

Look forward to reading more

Rae.