At first I didn't think I would like the formatting, but this is really ingenius! I love the different emotions you put them through and saying what I've told myself so many times. I really hope you didn't go through this, but this story is amazing. I would even say you could publish something like this. You'd need a few more chapters, but wow. I really liked it!

Oh wow... A very powerful piece. Unique style and an extremely original idea.

Loved the punchlines which ended with "exactly"...

Seriously, some stories move you and this is one of those stories...

somewhat magnificent.

loved how you wrote it, kinda a dialogue, but still not.

amazing.

-Sara.

xoxo.

awww! that was touching! plz do continue! this is awesome!

You are my first choice as a person and as an author. Not so bitter as earlier chapters. The unique format of talking to the mirror makes the self dialoge more believeable.

This is very touching, very chilling and moving. You really put the right degree of emotion into it. Very good job.

I seem to have skipped chapter five and found it today. This is a unique pattern for telling a story. I think it is great. Sad but great. I can not see anything that needs to be corrected or changed. Don

once again a very intense emotional chapter.

wow. you have really touched me with this story. plz keep writing! u should really publish this!

I will have to complete the review later today.

I am so happy to see your name on fiction press. This is your old friend doncat (donsilvercat) It has been years (?) since we exchanges e mails, stories and reviews.

don

This is so sad. I can't wait to read more of it.

Not sure what to say. As a story it is well written and very powerful. Someday things will be better for your heroine.

don.

Once again I sincerely hope this is 100% fiction. A powerful yet sad story. I wonder how old this person is? Steps should be taken to find a new home (with care lest she finds an even worse situation) Don.

pm to follow soon.

I like the twist and that she's speaking to her reflection. It's also interesting how both chapters end on 'exactly', it's a powerful ending I think.

It'll be interesting to see how the story unwinds.

This is a great poem. I sincerely hope it is complete fiction and not a word of truth.

I have not seen any of your work for a very long time. You are still on my "author's list" I hope that this was not sent in error.

Don (west texas)