I just reread all of the 17 chapter and I want to read more! When are you updating? Soon hopefully!

Ok, since this is in third person, you can easily describe what Hunter looks like, that was neglected, but Nascha however had GREAT description! That was awesome though. So it proves you can describe a character.

Not really sure of the plot, that needs to be established soon so that you'll keep the readers intact.

Day one of the Review Marathon from the Review Game Forum check it out! (link on me profile)

"I – I – I don't know," she whispered." Ah! I am so hooked. Who is this girl? What happened to her? Is she in trouble? I need to know!