Great job so far! You have created your own world_Good descriptions and natural dialogue. I like Aurel. He does seem like a flower, kind of fragile. I like Jun too. He’s kind of a pervert, but he’s a really nice person and it’s only natural. I like how they are kind of taking it slowly emotionally but at the same time are kind of exploring physically too. It has a nice pace and I’m glad we’ve got to learn about Aurel’s family. Will we hear more about Jun’s past? I’m interested to see where this heads in the future. It’s a good combination of eliciting curiosity, getting immersed in another world, and enjoying some intimacy too._

yay! :)

aw how cute Aurel thinks he's ugly! ...and omg what did jun do lol dont tell me i'll go read the next chapter.. i'm so glad i have to more chapters cause i would have spazzed if it stopped here

haha :) this chapter made me go :o and then . then . and back to :o ... yep i am definitely going to love this story ... off to the next chapter :)

this a really awesome story... can't wait to read more :)

More please :)

Sweet, they explore each other like curious children or teenagers in their first night together.

I love this story, can't wait for the next chapter!

Very exciting story, I didn't expect the last part.

Aurel is really some kind of guy/alien. But it is good luck for Jun.

Thank you, nice story so far. Can't wait to read the rest.

This is absolutley fascinating! If I had come across it in the SciFi section at Borders or Barnes and Noble, it most definitely would have made it into my 'buy' stack. I cannot hardly wait for the next chapter!

Yummy - alien strip tease! I love what you did with it, with Jun's discomfort and the way Aurel treats the whole idea of human sexuality so comfortably. And Jun was so sweet, telling Aurel how beautiful and special he is - the two are a wonderful pair, yin and yang. Pardon the expression, but the "rhythm" of the chapter was perfect, and you've done a wonderful job developing a relationship that's more than just sexual between the two characters.

Hahaha, the opening of this chapter was really funny. I LOVED how Aurel reacted, just like any alien who hasn't ever seen porn would. Jun's reactions were beyond hilarious to "see" :) Can't wait to see what Aurel has to tell Jun about anal sex with an alien.

Hooray! I'm always so happy when I see that there is a new chapter! I love this and I'm glad your writer's block is gone.

ah you just had to stop there didnt you? lol yay for an update! *hearts* i missed this story

i hope you're having a great holiday season as well! :D

These two make me want to giggle so much. I wonder what twists this story will have to make it juicy and delicious :3