i love your story keep updating

SQUEE! I'm so happy you updated so fast!

Great chapter, just noticed two errors I think. But I tend to average around ten gazillion errors, so that's no big deal.

I'm so happy that they met and the Vanzatoan doesn't think he's a total creeper!

Personally, I like the taste of bittermelon. But not grapefruit. Grapefruit is icky.

That was a really interesting way of making them meet. I would have just made them crash into each other at the market, but you found a way to bring him home. :D

In response to your a/n, doesn't everyone?

And I also liked the way that you explained stuff through the Vanzatoan's speech. Because the other guy (haha forgot his name just like Mike and Joe) didn't understand, so that made sense and it wasn't too forced when he said that.

I LOVE YOU! Update within the next week! I'm not too concerned because you usually update fast.

Yes another story! I love this one! Can't wait for the hot explicit love scenes! :p

NEW STORY! I'M SO PROUD OF YOU!

So, I really liked the first part and the last part, but the middle seemed to have quite a bit of back-story. I think it might have been better if you didn't describe so much about the alien/ humanoid things. And surprisingly, I didn't see that coming, the Vanzatoan being a male. I guess I didn't really read the description, I just figured that it would be awesome.

Anyway, get that next chapter out soon! I'm excited to see what happens!

I love it. You don't really see a lot of stories with extraterrestrials in them.

Bravo,

The Purple Knight One Oh One