| Reviews for Haiku 3 |
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Alix Cohen 1/2/11 . chapter 20Happy new year, Al! Glad to see you're still writing. And if you miss snow Come to my hometown, or Pittsburgh, where my school is- there's plenty out here. Meh. I just got back from a wonderful week in sunny Cancun, and it's difficult to get used to cold weather now, but I have to. |
nickyO 12/4/10 . chapter 16these poems bring the reader into the moment, good, solid work. |
nickyO 12/4/10 . chapter 17lol, for the first one in this set. |
kloun mannequin 12/3/10 . chapter 17I like the last verse, made ma laugh. |
Alix Cohen 12/3/10 . chapter 17Interesting use of the word "noisome." Did you know it means "smelly"? |
Alix Cohen 12/3/10 . chapter 16I can see the lights like that from the Cathedral It is beautiful. Been thinking of home a lot now that it's two weeks until I go there... |
Alix Cohen 11/25/10 . chapter 15Watch your syllables- your very first line has six or did you mean that? :) I've started to wash dishes since I started school Not my fav'rite chore. Organizing is more fun, but you're right, it does take a lot of time. |
Alix Cohen 11/22/10 . chapter 14Again with the syll- ables! "Glaciers" is three when I read aloud. But still beautiful... I love watching stars at home I knew their names, once. And ev'ry cloud does have a silver lining, if it's only the moon. :) |
Alix Cohen 11/22/10 . chapter 13Ah! Daffodils and vi'lets remind me of home- and bright red tulips We always have flowers... now I come to school, wjere the only color's leaves and the coat of arms is flowers on Cathedral lawn but I miss gardens. |
Alix Cohen 11/19/10 . chapter 10Where is this place that you remember from childhood? Ah, to be so young and to have your life unfolding before you; when I was little, I knew exactly what I wanted to do and be. Everything made sense. |
moonsliver86 11/19/10 . chapter 1Really liked the 3rd Haiku from this set. In particular, the comparison of the dead tree to the bareness of winter appealed to me. |
Alix Cohen 11/16/10 . chapter 9An odd turn of thought for you, Al; it's not like you to focus on death. It ain't so dry here; I got out my boots today, and my umbrella. I don't feel like post- ing haiku right now...it hap- pens to diaries. |
Alix Cohen 11/13/10 . chapter 8Life so small, and yet it can see the larger world and encompass it in thought-we still sail by stars that may be long dead What we see, is real to us; the stars are not themselves, but also re- flect society. |
Alix Cohen 11/7/10 . chapter 7Crazy little bug who knows what a moth's thinking? Certainly not I What were you reading? It must have been awesome, to keep you up till five. |
Alix Cohen 11/6/10 . chapter 6It sounds beautiful! I can't see the sunset, ex- cept from Cathedral. Can you post pictures? I miss those colors; all I see are autumn leaves. |