Wow! At first I thought this was going to be a silly little poem, but the word choice here is amazing! You should try some slam poetry/spoken word because the things you write when read aloud have such power to them!

haha i had no idea waht a wenis was, so the word play was fun to apply to different things :) i really like teh rythm of it, especially "an armpost". not why it would be a crowd pleaser though? like teh little anatomical references though, the absent nerve endings, the paralysis: i'd never thought of that before, and its quite true eh? this made me laugh :)

ahahaha! in my old high school, we used to call our olecranon processes wenises, so I read this with that in mind, though I could be completely wrong ("right elbow" makes me think I may be correct though.)

this is great. the diction and subject matter are at completely different ends of the spectrum, which makes it even better.

- Leila

lol, that's not age appropiate. rated k? what if a kid has high-ass vocabuary read it? lmao, it's hilirious i guess. if reviewers know what exactly is going on in the poem. once again, lmao. peace out [x

This probably doesn't count as a review, but I just wanted to say this poem cracked me up! Was that the point? I'm not sure, but I thought it was hillarious.

Quite liked the line 'nerve endings in absentum', that sounds very pretty.

But yeah. XD

Curiosity got the better of me.

'soft and squishy

beached jellyfish'

...

'The bastard child

of my right elbow'

Oh my...