It really is a shame there aren't more reviews...

I really like this. Good characters, good ideas. One thing:

I have no idea what time period this is in. If you could clear this up, your story will be stunning, dear

OMG THAT WAS A SUPER GOOD STORY

that scared the heck out of me! the other characters are so dumb!

OMG! This is so good! :) I am so glad that I found this story! Keep writing. Continue soon! :]

Wow, your first chapter is really wonderful! It's definitely creative and a lot creepy. (Which is a compliment for a horror.) I really hope you continue it! I subscribed.

I love the mystery of it all, and the unpredictability. I have no clue what's going to happen.

My one tip would be to slow down the part of the doctors leaving. To make it a tiny bit more realistic (but this is just me being picky.) The doctor would probably check on the mother or clean the baby up. You could also slow down the death scene.

Over all nice job

Check me out: /s/2857189/1/Forever_Gone

-Loretta-