|Reviews for Crystal|
| happyflowers0729 11/11/10 . chapter 14
I LOVE IT!:)
| Green Gummy Bear 11/8/10 . chapter 11
| DeenaSoraDrake 11/8/10 . chapter 11
Well there you have it. Crisis averted. B) Though I must say that was very cowardly of Paul and Michael to make the blood offering to Johnny. Had they hoped if they gained his protection, they wouldn't be killed by him? Oh ho, I think so.
| WolfLover74 11/8/10 . chapter 11
WOW! Simply wow. That was amazing. I loved the way Johnny came crashing in to save them all. Another twist. I can't wait to see what happens next.
| NexusCRStorm 11/8/10 . chapter 11
A good chapter, if not seeming a little fast. With some extra description, and detail you could split this in to 2 chapters, and have a bit of a cliff hanger:P
Will be interesting where you go from here if this isn't near the end of the story
| SecretRose88 11/8/10 . chapter 11
Wow, that was intense. If I was Johnny I would have eaten their jugulars... but that's just me. How do you crank these chapters out so fast? Do you already have them written?
| happyflowers0729 11/7/10 . chapter 10
aw i love how you update in like a day
| Green Gummy Bear 11/6/10 . chapter 9
A little... descriptive... but not too much, I guess.
Still interesting morals delema...
| happyflowers0729 11/6/10 . chapter 9
| NexusCRStorm 11/6/10 . chapter 9
Then he did that flowing thing again and brought us both down to the rug in front of the fireplace
"that flowing thing"... Could possibly be described as "Celerity". This implies movement at speed. This is a common "power" that vampires have, and you can find mention of it in most vampire novels :).
Over all, I quite like the chapter. Johnny seems intent to prove to Crystal that his life isn't for her although she's not listening. I'm curious as to whether she will feel like that when she turns. hehe
| happyflowers0729 11/5/10 . chapter 8
:) i like how you discribed the concert the natural high yah get after its over i love it just like in love this chapter:)
| SecretRose88 11/5/10 . chapter 8
It's nice to see Johnny showing some fear... and jealousy.
Paul should just hook up with Ellie instead of Crystal. Then everyone will be happy!
Can't wait to see how this ends
| WolfLover74 11/5/10 . chapter 8
Oh boy Crystal is just too funny. Hmm makes me wonder if Johnny would prefer Crystal to remain as she is. Thanks for the wonderful updates.
| Vampireacademyrox 11/5/10 . chapter 8
love it plz ud soon :D
| Green Gummy Bear 11/4/10 . chapter 7
I love the tension! I think you should put something in about Johnny's relation and thoughts towards Ellie. I would like to know what he think of her.