|Reviews for Crystal|
| happyflowers0729 11/4/10 . chapter 7
UPDATE UpDATE I LOVE IT:)
| WolfLover74 11/3/10 . chapter 6
This story just keeps getting better and better. Keep up the great work.
| WolfLover74 11/1/10 . chapter 4
Now that is going to be one interesting date. I can't wait to see what happens next.
| WolfLover74 11/1/10 . chapter 3
WOW! Crystal is really coming into becoming a vampire. I was shocked but in a pleasant way. Oh I'm wondering if Paul is truly interested in Crystal or if he's playing a game with her.
| NexusCRStorm 11/1/10 . chapter 4
First of all, I'll say that I really like this story so far. Your characters all have distinct personalities. The one correction that I can find at the moment is
"You can sleep in the theatre," he said.
In the UK, movie theatre's are called "Cinemas". A theatre here is where one goes to watch plays on stage.
Look forward to the next update.
| Green Gummy Bear 10/31/10 . chapter 3
I LOVE THE END SENTANCE!
" Johnny could kiss as many necks as he wanted, but his lips were mine!"
| happyflowers0729 10/31/10 . chapter 3
| happyflowers0729 10/30/10 . chapter 2
I really like it UPdateSooN:)
| Green Gummy Bear 10/30/10 . chapter 2
Whoa! If Crystal kills the hunters...no...maybe not a good idea.
| WolfLover74 10/29/10 . chapter 1
Oh I'm so glad to see the third part already. Oh no
I hope Crystal tells someone about her vision, and I'm so happy that Lisa and Kenny had two sons.