| Reviews for Crystal |
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happyflowers0729 11/4/10 . chapter 7UPDATE UpDATE I LOVE IT:) |
WolfLover74 11/3/10 . chapter 6This story just keeps getting better and better. Keep up the great work. |
WolfLover74 11/1/10 . chapter 4Now that is going to be one interesting date. I can't wait to see what happens next. |
WolfLover74 11/1/10 . chapter 3WOW! Crystal is really coming into becoming a vampire. I was shocked but in a pleasant way. Oh I'm wondering if Paul is truly interested in Crystal or if he's playing a game with her. |
NexusCRStorm 11/1/10 . chapter 4First of all, I'll say that I really like this story so far. Your characters all have distinct personalities. The one correction that I can find at the moment is "You can sleep in the theatre," he said. In the UK, movie theatre's are called "Cinemas". A theatre here is where one goes to watch plays on stage. Look forward to the next update. |
Green Gummy Bear 10/31/10 . chapter 3I LOVE THE END SENTANCE! " Johnny could kiss as many necks as he wanted, but his lips were mine!" Brilliant!:) |
happyflowers0729 10/31/10 . chapter 3Update:) |
happyflowers0729 10/30/10 . chapter 2I really like it UPdateSooN:) |
Green Gummy Bear 10/30/10 . chapter 2Whoa! If Crystal kills the hunters...no...maybe not a good idea. |
WolfLover74 10/29/10 . chapter 1Oh I'm so glad to see the third part already. Oh no I hope Crystal tells someone about her vision, and I'm so happy that Lisa and Kenny had two sons. |