AW!

That was so sad! But so freaking good! You used repetition really REALLY effectively, reinforcing your ideas, and then mixing those lines up later on. It reminds me of something in my own life...and I think that's why I liked it so much. These lines especially:

"You're right—

I'm too depressed…

You're right—

You're too busy…"

Good one, this is great. I can relate a lot. Write on and be positive!

Anna