| Reviews for No More Room in Hell |
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ImmanenceEnsured 4/11/12 . chapter 1Love zombie drama, loved this, again. |
LeKo 1/24/12 . chapter 1I've read this story several times and it always manages to make me cry. Thank you |
Insomiak 11/28/10 . chapter 1This is amazing Magalina, I dislike the lack of reviews you have for it. So here's one from mee! I love the ambiguity of it all. You don't go into great detail about the Doctor or the Ward, just that they're opposing ideas that are keeping these two men apart. Neither do you explain why or how everything is all fucked up, which adds to this sort of concept-driving style of writing. It doesn't come across as simple, though, because while you read it you try to fill in blanks, like who the Doctor is or what Jed's so scared of and why he feels compelled to save all of these people and Lawrence. Well, assumedly he's got a thing for Lawrence, but you don't come right out and say it in your writing. It's subtle. You're really good at saying a whole lot with just a few words, Magalina. I honestly admire it! But it needs more reviews still. -Marsha. |
thistlepaws 11/11/10 . chapter 1I enjoyed reading this. The scene where Jed follows Lawrence, hanging back and shooting things, listening to Lawrence's sniffles and knowing he's being an utter jerk was especially powerful. It's a pretty bleak world but Jed has Lawrence and vice versa. Thanks for a good read. |
Cattails 11/3/10 . chapter 1Alright, I LOVED that *insert girlish squeal here* And I'm in such a zombie mood, too! I love their personalities...especially Lawrence. He's just so...okay, really freaking cute. And I love (I'm using love a lot, aren't I?) that Jed followed him everywhere. And that last paragraph? I was dying of the sweetness. Seriously. These two are lovely. I love (there it is again) what you did with the prompts. It was a fine story indeed. |