I rather like your writing style; it works for this. Very conversational and casual. A little snarky.

And so much heavy foreshadowing! I cannot even begin to guess as to where this is leading, but I can feel the pressure even this early in. Especially the repeated remarks about how naive you all were.

Tree blood tastes like apples, huh... I rather appreciate that.

And am I just dense, or are we having a case of a nameless narrator?

snohshine

Hey this one is realy nice. Go on. Thax 4 ur P.M. Can u kindly review my story 'Black & white life'

Wow, I like this :) Very nice writing, relatable.