|Reviews for Journey|
| snohshine 12/11/10 . chapter 5
I rather like your writing style; it works for this. Very conversational and casual. A little snarky.
And so much heavy foreshadowing! I cannot even begin to guess as to where this is leading, but I can feel the pressure even this early in. Especially the repeated remarks about how naive you all were.
Tree blood tastes like apples, huh... I rather appreciate that.
And am I just dense, or are we having a case of a nameless narrator?
| River Trust 11/12/10 . chapter 7
Hey this one is realy nice. Go on. Thax 4 ur P.M. Can u kindly review my story 'Black & white life'
| AmongTheEternallyDamned 11/2/10 . chapter 1
Wow, I like this :) Very nice writing, relatable.