 joan of arc the 2nd 2004-01-12 . chapter 1 just wont to say somthing charles asked joan to help and get back paris the rest was good |
 Dani 2002-12-20 . chapter 1 I really don't know what to say. It was well written, and I think you hit on what he was thinking pretty well. Still, something was missing. Oh, don't mind me. But it feels empty somehow. |
 Hollow1 2001-09-17 . chapter 1YES!!! finally i find something about Joan of Arc, this was really good! |
 Devine Gantelle 2001-07-09 . chapter 1That was cool! I think you did a terrific job of painting the Dauphin's emotions |
 Gabriela1 2001-06-11 . chapter 1That was good! I can just imagine him thinking that. |
 Shkira 2001-05-29 . chapter 1 Awesome. How you depicted Chuck's (^_^) reaction was great, his argument and indescision. Creative piece. Great job! |