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| Insanity Streak 11/6/10 . chapter 1
I really like some of the metaphors you use like, "frosty sleaves" and "rehash the ashes"- this is a really good line. The imagery is quite vivid also, but I think some punctuation here and there would help a great deal. Sometimes I didn't know where to pause or stop or continue from one line to the next and I had to re-read it a couple of times just so I could find the rhythm of the poem. Other than that, it was a great read.