|Reviews for Music Videos: The Untold Story|
| WellNope 4/2/11 . chapter 23
What a way to leave off. Heheh.
The last chapter was amazing
| WellNope 4/2/11 . chapter 18
That seems to me like Bree is alive! Right?
Daniel's hair totally contrasts with what I imagined. Weird.
And it's really, really strange for Ari to be thinking like Frizz
| WellNope 4/2/11 . chapter 17
God, poor Ari...I hope Bree isn't really dead, but I doubt that's the way it is. And I knew Daniel and Frizz were going to be a couple ;) somehow Daniel doesn't seem like he can stay completely happy though...
| WellNope 4/2/11 . chapter 12
Eh...was this an accidental post of Ch.10 of the other story?
| WellNope 4/2/11 . chapter 11
So, so satisfying that they got back at the boss! Yes!
| WellNope 4/2/11 . chapter 10
Hey, it's No Line On The Horizon!
I spy an Ali and an Isaac on the names list...
| WellNope 4/2/11 . chapter 7
Oh, poor Daniel.
Frizz is *quite* helpful! and quite interesting. I wonder what happened that made her that way...
The slaughterhouse is still bothering me, a lot. R.
| WellNope 4/2/11 . chapter 6
Is the boss giving them nightmares? That would make this make sense...
"Bree hated blue eyes more than any other eye color."
I like that sentence. It's a strong one because it's such an unusual opinion...kind of like something a short story could be started with, because obviously there's some reason behind it...
This is starting to seem sort of post-apocalyptic (except obviously there's still society, it just sucks) or something, with the slaughterhouse (and the powers? are they in this one? I feel like Penny might have some sort of power...) and it's totally not what I expected...interesting that Penny and Ari get their own story. I wonder if it connects to Nicole's/David's/everyone else's.
| WellNope 4/2/11 . chapter 5
Oh god, I feel bad for Daniel. I thought the cut lip at the beginning was bad, but the end...poor guy.
| WellNope 4/2/11 . chapter 4
Ugh, the slaughterhouse sounds terrible.
| WellNope 4/2/11 . chapter 3
Falling Pencils is a GREAT band name.
Kind of weird that Penny calls herself Bree now...hey, that's another thing we have in common, characters getting weird multiple names!
Interesting that this is in the sort-of-future...
| BeautifulStream 12/12/10 . chapter 6
Thank you so much Oboe. Chica! I need feedback right now y'know :P . I would post more but I have to wait 6 days haha
| Oboe.Chica 12/12/10 . chapter 6
You are really setting the story up very well - the suspension is going to kill me! The juxtaposition between past and future really adds to the tension. You are doing an excellent job of keeping the readers' interests!