|Reviews for Drags|
| Domina 1/15/11 . chapter 1
Beautiful. "how can you incinerate all the guilt" is a gorgeous line
| Insanity Streak 11/10/10 . chapter 1
I like this poem, very clever. You have some very simple yet effective lines that produce a strong clear image. Well, for example, 'pulling sweet soot in every drag' is an insightful way of looking at smoking. I also liked the line 'Effortlessly filtering chemicals from your lungs... and sing smoke into the fog'
I also enjoyed how you romanticised (in a sense) the addiction of smoking.
The only constructive criticism I have is what is the purpose of the last line? Personally, I can't see where the guilt side of it is coming from.
Other than that, cool poem.