This is quite good actually, the sun and the shadow seem to be like metaphors for something deeper - but that's just a guess of mine. Anyway, don't be worried if people don't like it, it's always fun to write something more unusual! :)

This is..interesting. It is sorta...I guess, phylosophycal? (I don't know if that's a word...Tee Hee). Well, anyway, I sorta THought about phylosophy. This poem confuses and made my brain work overload. But I really liked it. You should definitely write more poems like this one. Maybe about the horizon?

Yeah, that was pretty weird.. not really sure what to think.

btw this is (or was, seeing as I changed my pen name) CassieCat97.

I asked you to beta for me, but I no longer need that, because I'm not writing that story anymore.

I like the general concept of shadows as well as the somewhat child-like tone to this. I also like that it came off as a stream-of-consciousness type of piece. :)