OMG I can't believe she tried to kill herself. Oh poor Meg. I hope she will get the help she needs and get better. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon. :)

I'm glad Meg was rescued. I hope she will be fine. Can't wait to read more. Great chapter. :)

Great chapter. I'm off to read more. Sorry I haven't read and reviewed lately. I've been busy. Anyway, great chapter. :)

Poor Meg. John needs to find her and soon. I hope Hermione isn't kidnapped. Please update soon. Can't wait to read more of this. :)

I just found your story, and I have to say that it is rather interesting. However, it is difficult to follow the story at times because of the grammatical mistakes and overuse of many words. Nevertheless, it has the potential of being an interesting read.

Sorry I didn't review right away. I've been busy lately. Anyway, I hope John saves Meg before something horrible happenes to her. Loved the chapter. Please update soon. :)

Oh boy this just keeps getting better. Can't wait to read more and find out what happens next. Please update soon. :)

Best chapter yet. Full of suspense and drama. Can't wait to read more. I hope Ariel wakes from her coma and I hope Meg and John get together. Can't wait to read more. Update soon. :)

I hope Meg will talk to John soon. Great chapter. Can't wait to read more. Update again soon. :)

Sorry I didn't review sooner. I've been busy working on the next chapter for my story. Anyway, this just keeps getting better. Can't wait to read more. :)

I like the plot of your story but am finding it really hard to follow as the grammar is shocking and most of the details are inaccurate. Such as getting a transfer from NYCPD to the Sydney Police Department is really not possible as these two departments are in no way linked, being that they are in separate countries with different legal systems. I am also finding that some of the details are superfluous, such as describing in detail what a person is wearing. Also it seems as if someone has just run spell check through the story without making sure that the words are being used in the correct context. I know it may seem like I am being rude and nit-picky but I believe that this story would be much more reader friendly if you had someone edit it more thoroughly.

I wonder what John did that makes him want to get revenge. The note was creepy and I feel so bad for Ariel. Can't wait to read more. Please update again soon. :)

That was a long chapter. Poor Brooklyn. I hope her uncle finds Scar and kills him. I enjoyed this chapter and I can't wait to read more. Please update soon. :)

Aw poor Brooklyn! Great chapter!

Good chapter. I especially liked the murder scene part. Can't wait to read more. Please update again soon. :)