i really like this one. it reminds me of someone i know. you portrayed a complicated relationship in a succinct way, which is kind of hard to do sometimes.

thank you.

You portray the message in a deep, complicated sort of way. It's different to the more common ways, which I like. For me the last stanza says the most, which again I like because it means you have to read the whole poem to get the gist of it.