Just read the whole thing, loved it! The whole thing is SO original and it's refreshing to read a different story. I was hooked on the first chapter; it sucks that everyone judged Zee like that. I'm glad his mother is supportive, can't wait to see his fathers reaction! Update soon :)

I loved the argument they had at the end. xD It was hilarious. Actually, the whole chapter was hilarious. And adorable! :D

OMG Another great chapter

i was kinda confused at the start.. but anywho

No problem i really like your story so i odnt mind reviewing it...

Andd awwwwwwww no boyfriend yet... ;(

aha anyways\

like i said a great chapter...!

I really love this story. Cant seem to get enough of it :)

Perhaps some couch action next time ? Both of them are going in the same direction you know ? :P

Both of them, dinner, in his room... Linda gets a hint to whats going on? That might be an interesting way to continue this story.

As you've said before, we would love to see the climax starting to evolve? Perhaps into a beautiful rose :)

Anyway, please do continue making these wonderful chapters :)

OMG...

LOL!

I think i review your chapters just so you can answer them!

AND YAY KISSES...

BOOOOO MOMS HOME.. .

can the next chapter have more mac... and a new boyfriend for him... one tats awesome... who wont dump him again?

LOL

ANYWHO..

Imma be honest with you...

I like the idea of this chapter...

But i find you rushed it...

Especially at the end...

I like it though...

AND YAY KISSES!

Hey! I love the concept and I just wanted to say that I'm also obsessed with naming my characters with the letter Z (maybe its because my own name starts with a Z) Haha. Also, I like your descriptions, but I think as you pointed out yourself a little length would be nice. I've only read the first chapter, so I don't know much but will review the others as well. Nice story though :)

Ouuu YAY more Zakie and Zee i like it...

Even more yay, Zakies not grounded...

Major Sadface for Mac... i want him to find a good boifriend... one who wont hurt...

Me(to Mac):Pick Me! OU OU Pick Me!

Me:*waits for response*

LOLLZZ

ANYWHO!

Another great chapter!

Good chapter! :D I loved the last paragraph, it was funny and adorable. xD

Also, I like how Zee fell asleep in History, 'cause I always fall asleep in History too! xD

Anyway, it's great that you don't have writer's block anymore, and that you updated so quickly. I hope you update again soon! :D

hey omg... i really like this story... its AWESOME... well anyways...

Same stuff as ausuall... make the chapters longer... and its so cute... i kinda want to see Zakie and Zee Together... feels like we almost never see them together... 8

Good chapter! :) Not much happened in this chapter, but I still love reading this story. xD Update again soon! :)

Good chapter! Please update sooner though!

I really like it! I can't wait for you to update.. So update soon, please! I'm kind of hoping that Mac plays, somewhat, of a large role? Like he, maybe, gets feelings for Zee or something because I love him! I like how he's bipolar. Keeps things interesting. But all in all, great story. Updateeee!

Yay, thanks for updating! :D I loved this chapter, it was so adorable! Well, when Zee and Zakie met up and then kissed and everything, *that* was super-adorable! :) Anyway, write more soon! xD

nice one

it makes you (at least me) feel fluffy all over

XD that's how i'll describe this chapter XDD