|Reviews for Magnam X|
| Kanrei 11/30/10 . chapter 6
still some random gramatic and spelling errors but nice chapter. Try not to write in bold though..gives people head aches (like me)
| iCY the Polar Kid 11/29/10 . chapter 6
Oh yay! New chappie and it's Tapeworm! I like this chappie, heh. Ohh I noticed a typo in the beginning somewhere about "sent" which you meant to put "scent"
but other then that it's awesome!
You should really consider publishing it. I like it A LOT! Heh. Keep up the awesomeness Ramon!
| Story writer i think 11/29/10 . chapter 2
Got me to like it in the first chapter, very very good my friend.
| iCY the Polar Kid 11/29/10 . chapter 5
Aw, I like this chappie. It's so nice!
Hm...now that he's found his mom, I wonder where his dad is?
Really awesome work Ramon, keep it up!
| Kanrei 11/20/10 . chapter 4
awkward scene number 1 XD
| iCY the Polar Kid 11/17/10 . chapter 3
Getting very interesting. Everything about this story is great! (minus the very few typos here and there) but other then that this is genius! Great growth and improvement. Keep up the awesomeness! You're doing awesomely great!
| iCY the Polar Kid 11/17/10 . chapter 2
Nice! I wonder why they're going after him out of all people. Interesting!
| Kanrei 11/16/10 . chapter 3
both chapter 2 and 3 are really good, some typos here and there
"Yes, a Shadowen. A being made of nothing but pure evil. The only have one goal and that is to destroy the earth and us, the Magnams, and rebuild it to there liking."
wrong 'their' XD otherwise good work!
| iCY the Polar Kid 11/16/10 . chapter 1
Really really really really like the first chappie! Awesomeness Ramon!
| Kanrei 11/16/10 . chapter 1
for me its quality not quantity so this is definitely quality