still some random gramatic and spelling errors but nice chapter. Try not to write in bold though..gives people head aches (like me)

Oh yay! New chappie and it's Tapeworm! I like this chappie, heh. Ohh I noticed a typo in the beginning somewhere about "sent" which you meant to put "scent"

but other then that it's awesome!

You should really consider publishing it. I like it A LOT! Heh. Keep up the awesomeness Ramon!

Got me to like it in the first chapter, very very good my friend.

Aw, I like this chappie. It's so nice!

Hm...now that he's found his mom, I wonder where his dad is?

Really awesome work Ramon, keep it up!

Magnam X!

awkward scene number 1 XD

Getting very interesting. Everything about this story is great! (minus the very few typos here and there) but other then that this is genius! Great growth and improvement. Keep up the awesomeness! You're doing awesomely great!

Nice! I wonder why they're going after him out of all people. Interesting!

both chapter 2 and 3 are really good, some typos here and there

eg

"Yes, a Shadowen. A being made of nothing but pure evil. The only have one goal and that is to destroy the earth and us, the Magnams, and rebuild it to there liking."

wrong 'their' XD otherwise good work!

Really really really really like the first chappie! Awesomeness Ramon!

for me its quality not quantity so this is definitely quality