This is really cool. XD A concrete poem right? Again, I think you're a pretty natural poet, cause you're good at portraying the realism as well as the feeling of a moment. You're good at doing snapshots.

And I hope your friend is alright.

Daphne

Aww...that's so sad. :( I'm sorry for your friend. But at least they have a friend like you to comfort them. :)

it's sweet, I like this, the tree shape, feel kind of chrsitmas eve

I haven't seen a concrete poem in quite some time. It's nice to see, and you did a lovely job of it too. I liked how it was in the shape of a tear, but about being there for someone. Kind of managed to get both people into the poem. Nice!