|Reviews for Beast in the Barrens|
| Haruhiholmes 9/30/12 . chapter 5
I'm impressed, not only are Sam and Reese adorable but this is properly scary. The image of the Jersey Devil right above them in the forest had me shaking.
Love the idea of the slash-scooby doo thing, it works very well.
| breakthehabit 3/17/12 . chapter 4
I'm craving a turkey sandwich. P
| cityrain 5/20/11 . chapter 6
This is something I would do-go on a hunt for proof of the Jersey Devil, lol. That's my idea of entertainment. xD
I lovelovelove this story. It's like the perfect mixture of creepiness and adorableness. :D I did kinda want to sacrifice Gwen to the Jersey Devil a couple times, lol.
| i-wish-i-had-wings 4/22/11 . chapter 6
hmm, i'm definetly going to look up how the jersey devil looks, sounds kind of weird.. my dislike for gwen has gotten worse, she's just so...uurgh! gotta ask though, were you fighting with a friend when you wrote this? cause it seems so real, lol. i'm glad she seems to be nicer to ewan, though i have to admit i hoped the jd would kill her .; the story is great but you should get it checked, there are some grammar mistakes.
| Cailleach64 3/12/11 . chapter 6
Nice. I really hope Gwen's change in attitude sticks. Permanently.
| Marzanna 1/4/11 . chapter 6
This. Is awesome. :o
You've got great writing skills! It draws me into the story. I wanna hug it.
I can't wait till the next one!
| I love happy endings '94 12/26/10 . chapter 6
that was honest to god one of the cutest stories i have ever read except for nearly pissing myself when the Jersey Devil jumped on the roof it was so adorable!
| Bridgett-blah 12/24/10 . chapter 6
Yay xD Cant wait for the next one!
| pretensions 12/23/10 . chapter 6
oh my god, so cute.
damn museum, not taking their tape.
i'm going to have fun guessing how the ghost coyote will come into play in the next story - that is, assuming it is going to be included. and i'm guessing it will be? just because you mentioned it here.
| TinyMusicalShore 12/23/10 . chapter 6
ADORABLE. Damn people not believing Gwen, they're just haters. I'm excited there's another installment! Fantastic work : )
| Zethoa 12/23/10 . chapter 6
Evan is taming the beast! Woo hoo!
And hm, I wonder where the phantom coyote is gonna come in. Maybe in the next segment? It seems to random to just be filler.
Love these little stories. Really truly do. Can't wait for the next one.
| I love happy endings '94 12/19/10 . chapter 5
ok so ur story is fucking amazing i read the first one convington house and loved it and somehow this is even better. Love your work!
| Zethoa 12/17/10 . chapter 5
Eesh, this is way creepier than Covington House. I rather like it. ).
Wonder what the Jersey Devil actually looks like. Can't wait for a full description.
| Bridgett-blah 12/17/10 . chapter 5
Ep xDD Oh my GOSH, the Jersey Freaking Devil, is ON THEIR CAR
| Gaweldr 12/17/10 . chapter 5
Oh my god oh my god oh my god. SUSPENSE. I agree with you, the last chapter was very, very, very cool, and this one toot. (Okay this one is AWESOME.
Sam and Reese really are cute. I like the way there is no "I'm bigger than thou so I'm the one protecting you", they are hugging and calming each other. Sweet ) (to the point I can't tell if I prefer one or the other, what's really rare. It's Reese AND Sam, the item x) )
Because I'm a little pussy who can't watch Shaun of the dead alone in my house, the end of the chapter (and the dead coyote) give me the creeps. Okey, I know there is no wood near me, nor even coyotes in my country (unless in zoo, maybe) but...still !
Bref, really well done )
(Guessing : is Gwen a secret alpha werewolf who calm down after his rival submit ? :D)
Thanks for this chapter, and can't wait to read the next one ! I wish you Happy Christmas/St Nicholas/whatever till there )