No clue why I can't log in.

Anyway, I thought this was pretty good. Is it freeverse?

-H.R. Spade

I like this a lot...very good job on the descriptions. Shallowness is definitely one of my pet peeves. Great poem!

If only you knew how much that's helped me get through today. :)

Loved this. It was taking that same idea and morphing it from something inanimate to real people. And you are very much right. Shallow people can be unbearable sometimes.